Rewrite it into a dynamic, attention-getting conclusion that can pull together an essay on the death penalty, regardless of your own opinion on the issue. You may keep any of the original words/sentences that you want, in any order, but you may also delete/reorder/add words as necessary. You must write at least 7 sentences for full credit. You will may need to create your own thesis to “restate” if you don’t feel there is a restated thesis here. See West Guide Ch. 13 for specific techniques.
In conclusion, as I have proved, the death penalty is obviously still effective. It doesn’t matter what others say if it is a law. Therefore people can have their opinions; I don’t care.
Introduction Exercise Critique the following underdeveloped introduction and suggest some items the essay writer can use to develop it. There may be several errors other than brevity. Rewrite it into a dynamic, attention-getting introduction that can generate an entire essay on spanking as discipline for children, regardless of your own opinion on the issue. You may keep any of the original words/sentences that you want, in any order, but you may also delete/reorder/add words as necessary. You must write at least 7 sentences for full credit. See West Guide Ch. 12 for specific techniques. Some people think it’s okay to spank their children for punishment. Others disagree. Spanking children can be harmful because it can cause psychological trauma, it can leave lasting physical scars, and there are better ways to teach discipline. This essay will explore all aspects of spanking.
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