essay revision h

This essay need a revision, my original work is post in the attached file, please check. Need to Add more 300 words, and here is the comment, need to change my essay based on this comment:

“Killing in war is not usually understood to be murder unless it is the result of a war crime. Good point about the ability to care for children whose parents cannot effectively care for them. It is not clear whether your own views are on the side of pro-life or pro-choice. Even if it is challenging, position papers require you to choose a side and defend it to the best of your ability. Good reference list to support your writing”.

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