essay edit revising 1
Please edit and revise my essay.
Follow the steps
Use the third person.
state your opinion in third person (your thesis).
what the opposing views are.
Include the points you will use in the body to support your thesis.
For every paragraph, provide an arguable topic sentence that directly supports your thesis.
Conclude your essay with some final thoughts on the subject.
Include original drafts on all three essays.
500 words in length.